Now I'm afraid my hangers (last lines) aren't as good as the others. I suppose this a good excercise because I haven't really thought about last lines much. Honestly, most of my chapter breaks have just come when I've thought, 'probably time for a new chapter', and this exercise has really made me think about where and how the chapters are ending. Here they are, anyway.
1. Ana looked up as he approached, and the Captain knew without hesitation that this was going to be the right decision.
2. ‘I think we should go back and find out why she’s here,’ said Visha. When Jonny hesitatd, she added, ‘I’ll race ya!’
3. ‘Do you know what they do with them up there?’ Jenna nodded grimly. Ben hesitated. ‘Does Visha?’
It has been fun taking part in this blogfest and reading through everyone's entries, so thank you to all who have taken part and commented on mine too.
This has really made me think about the way I structure chapters, although that's just making me want to edit more.